Back in the Game

Hi! Back in the game, so this is going to be a short post. I re-read Mac. Most of it was unsalvageable. Tone was a major problem. (As Cathy had suggested). Part of the problem was that the character was too schizophrenic. Cathy likes less emotional action types. I tend toward emotional types who ponder more and do less. I needed to come up with a more cohesive idea of who she really is and how she will act under the circumstances I've set up. SO, I've gotten started over again. We'll see how it goes. Wish me luck!